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We may not have known each other the longest,
Nor we have known each other the best.
I knew you only as a friend of friend,
But now, you are my only friend.
My shyness has always been a hindrance in building a relationship,
But that is certainly not the case with our friendship.
You make me feel secure and comfortable with your warmth and kindness.
Our friendship blossomed towards the end of our course,
But I promise you I will maintain it till the end of my life.
You have been my strength during my worst,
I know with you by my side, I will eventually regain my best.
We may not be siblings by birth,
But you mean more to me than a sister I never had.
If I have ever hurt you, I hope never,
I pray the special bond we share remains forever.
Sweet poem and a very beautiful picture.
ReplyDeleteVery honest expression of someone really close to you...Loved it!
ReplyDelete@Seema: Thank you so much. :):)
ReplyDelete@Saru: Thank you very much dear. Your beautiful poems inspired me to write this poem. :):)
Very beautiful :) I like it, expressions, image, feelings involved. All are eloquent!
ReplyDeleteLeo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
Hey thank you so much Leo. Appreciate it. I read some of your poems too, very beautifully written. :)
ReplyDeleteNicely crafted emotions.Very touching.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dear Akshay for the wishes.
Thank you my dear Christy. :)
ReplyDelete500 posts is a huge accomplishment. Congrats again :)
friend of a friend now my only friend - that was nice & seems like a prelude to a story of its own
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sujatha. Yes, I do have a very personal reason why I said that. She is really special and very dear to me. :)
ReplyDeleteA simple yet deeply felt poem with a perfect image to go along.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Pandeyji, coming from a great writer like you, its a huge complement for me. :)
DeleteExactly, if we are comfortable with someone we would easily be able to communicate with each other much more freely. No awkwardness. I like to be in such sort of relationships.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ash for your kind words, I am really glad you liked it. This was my first attempt at anything close to poetry so I am happy to be appreciated by wonderful writers like you. :)
Nice work. Like the simplicity and the feelings that you portrayed here. I've a friend like that. She has been with me from the day one of my college.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Leo for the nice words, really appreciate it. :)I really value true friendships a lot, friends make your life so much better. :)
DeleteAkki ...just loved every bit of it...its so touching....its soooo nice...i loved it ...its awesome boy :) God bless u :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sophie, you know how much your words mean to me. Love you! A big hug for that lovely comment! :)
DeleteBeautifully expressed.. U r good in expressing your feelings through poems too Akshay then why is this the only poem you wrote till date.. Try writing some more.. Its really good:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sonia. :) Well when I wrote this poem, I was apprehensive whether I would be able to do justice writing a poem but wrote whatever I felt and I am very glad it has been well appreciated. Will surely try writing poems in future. Thank you for the confidence in me, really appreciate it. :)
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